Clasping hands of miseries.
Breaking every single moment.
Crumbling my world lies.
Assurances seem so hollow.
Trust rests on the facaded soul.
His identity undisclosed yet a belief lingers.
Lies pile up and logic wanders.
Was i ever his or it was just customary?
I was in love but
What was it from him?
Beautful poem of questions that lie unanswered. and unfulfilled within…embrace the one who never turns away and he will bring a certain peace and joy into your life!
Thank you Wendell..I wish it were as easy as said to find someone who wont ever turn their back on you and make you happy always.
Some definite universal emotions being expressed here, I think most of us have come to a place like this at some point in our lives…it’s always tough. Great job with the gripping emotion in this one, Alcina.
Yes almost all have experienced such feelings.Thank you emma 🙂
I like the structuring of your words which is very effective. A succinct and thought-provoking poem.
Thank you. I aimed at the exact feel you got 🙂